I looove the coloring job. I can't find any mistakes there.
But... be prepared >.o I do see two mistakes in the drawing itself. Sorry if this offends.
1. Hands! They should be able to cover the entire face. Make them bigger! Tiny hands are far more noticeable than big hands. Also, long fingers are prettier than stumps! XD
2. Yes, oddly shaped boobies. Breasts should be able to slightly curve into the shape of the upper stomach when laying flat, so keep that in mind when standing/sitting up. They stick out a bit far here from the stomach.
Anyways, that's it. I really, really like the clothing details. You did a great job with the fold, the ruffles, the belts, etc. That's usually my weak point. ^_^
Hahaha laura said that too, damnit! Oh well, cant change it now, so the oddly shaped boobs will stay (i would change but its been inked so i cant :'( )
Why does everyone look at the boobs?!
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OTHERWISE I'm so annoyed that I can't draw creases like you. And colour like you
I can't do either!!!!
SNOTFAIR
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But... be prepared >.o I do see two mistakes in the drawing itself. Sorry if this offends.
1. Hands! They should be able to cover the entire face. Make them bigger! Tiny hands are far more noticeable than big hands. Also, long fingers are prettier than stumps! XD
2. Yes, oddly shaped boobies.
Anyways, that's it.
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Seriously, I just don't like talking.
plus, why were you interested only in her boobs? O.o'
hahaha
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ArisaCharlie///Charlottie x]]]
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Why does everyone look at the boobs?!
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ArisaCharlie///Charlottie x]]]
I laugh in the face of danger!!! .... Then I hide until it goes away
*makes lewd hand gestures*
;D
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Seriously, I just don't like talking.
Just kiddin'
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